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Writing Coach

Editor and Writing Coach

"Thanks for everything, Mary!  You are an A-1 writing coach." A.S., Minneapolis

"Great edits! Mary, thank you so much! I suspected tightening was needed, your nudge gets me over the inertia." G.S., San Diego

"I used your suggestions (thank you!) to revise my query letter and then sent the letter to an agent. She wrote back asking for the manuscript, a bio, a marketing statement, and a brief synopsis to go with it!" J.L., Minneapolis

"I am getting great response from the book. I am sending you a copy and you are in the acknowledgments. It could have never happened without you." S.P., California

"Gosh, Mary, I'm amazed at how fast you work! I feel encouraged with your response--you make everything seem positive, even as you recommend change!"  L.D., Arizona

"Thank you for weeding my story! It's exactly what I needed. I really appreciate the feedback and plan to go with what you suggested because it makes so much sense. Thank you for inspiring me and boosting my confidence!" N.R., Minneapolis

"You did a great job on my book and I will definitely let you know when I need more help, as well as refer others when the opportunity arises." D.G., California

"I’m very grateful for the thought you’ve put in your analysis of my stories and for insights that make me think about my own stories in a different way." K.L., Minneapolis

"Your comments were right on target and have helped immensely." E.W., St. Paul

"Thank you so much for your excellent, helpful comments. Can't wait to revise accordingly." A.G., New York City

 

Mary
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Do you have a dream book you want to write? A writing project you're longing to finish? A book proposal or a sample chapter that's due?

A natural part of the writing process is partnership with an experienced editor and coach. As a writing teacher at the Loft Literary Center, I've worked with hundreds of writers on both nonfiction and fiction projects.

My goal as a coach is to allow the unique voice in your writing to emerge, and help you become more conscious of both the strengths and weaknesses in your writing.

Having worked as a professional editor for fifteen years, I know how to evaluate a work-in-progress and give suggestions for fine-tuning. I enjoy watching the process of a piece of writing unfold, and I value the help a kind and thoughtful editor can bring to a work. I've helped writers develop and finish their book proposals, essays, short stories, and complete manuscripts. I work with writers at whatever level they need: in-depth editing or overview suggestions. My fee is hourly. I work with short stories, essays and memoirs, articles and columns, and
book-length fiction and nonfiction.

As a writing coach, I offer these services via email to my clients:

  • short (low-cost) weekly checkin to keep you accountable with your writing goals
  • positive feedback, innovative next steps, and fun writing exercises to keep you writing
  • creativity development--find and develop your voice as a writer and creative person via custom-designed writing and art exercises, journaling techniques, and kind feedback
  • regular review and feedback of your novel chapters or short stories
  • book coaching--how to start writing your book, develop it, and finish it
  • manuscript review: evaluation and in-depth report on the strengths and weaknesses of your book manuscript (fiction, memoir, nonfiction)
  • character development--for fiction writers who need help making their characters come alive on the page
  • develop and polish your query letter and book proposal packet for submission to agents
  • substantive and line editing of short stories, novels, memoirs and other nonfiction books, and poetry
If you're interested in working with me,
please e-mail me.